| Dark Poetry #2 |
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Missing You |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Many moons have waned and gone. Many chapters and passings it has mourned. Yet your tenderness it shall not blight. My dear angel, I do miss thee tonight. --------------------------------------------------- This is a repost from the open forums. Juz wanna share this lil' verse ... ~Verve |
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PureM Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22London, UK |
oh yeah! I can dig poems like this at the moment! thanks Verve.Matt |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I'm still trying to figure out why this poem has gone virtually unnoticed. I loved it, says so much with so little... -Tier |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Short and to the point.. and what a poignant point it makes. I loved this! Sheila |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Everyone ... Thank you for your kind comments. Really glad that u all liked it. =) ~verve |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
enjoyed reading..thanks for posting again ![]() ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh yes... Short and sweet, great job! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Great poem! You've managed to convey such emotion in just these four lines! |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sigh* Beautiful ![]() ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
VERY ROMANTIC.....the kind of poem that makes you begin to drift as you read the last words, and ponder who it is your dreaming of! Wonderful! |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
hmmm. i like. ![]() jann elizabeth |
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