| Dark Poetry #2 |
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Magnet of Love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone
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I feel a magnetism pulling me to you. It's a force out of my control. I have to come-I will. The choice is quickly becoming a demand. I'm being pulled with increasing strength. If I fight it much longer it may break me in two. And still, both parts would have to come. I have to be there. Throw me that iron pole, will you? It will make the trip that much quicker. One more little tug and I'm there.... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~It's force is strong sometimes isn't it? This poem is brief but packed. Emotionally packed. Great work. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i agree to this is packed. but i like the idea that its packed with your own expression on the subject. how you say you give it a uncommon up lift. great work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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