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A broken promise
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A broken promise |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I wait and wait staring ahead See if you recognize that you have made a promise to someone Each second is thieving hope away of you ever showing up Is this promise vacant just like the rest? Silence that I hear in your promise But I deprive my mind and went with my heart, The penalty that I pay is quite heavy, But the hope of you coming outweighs it, No, no, I shall not misplace reliance in you, You are what I have been waiting for, Waiting forever is not what I planned, Your have failed to keep your word, Tears of fruitlessness now run down my tender cheeks, Each waiting moment shakes my heart with thunder, Have you forgotten your promise… Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well its nice to see you again it was getting kind of lonely in here this late at night. well i voted for this its very good work. so keep them coming i need stuff to read. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ohhhh... this is such a touching poem... broken promises are always so hard to live with aren't they? |
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