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Dark Poetry #2

Pain of Words

meara
Junior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 15

0 posted 2000-07-16 11:21 PM

I have shattered the
silence of my pain
with so many words
that the thoughts
have lost all
meaning and yet
taken on a life
of their own

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-07-16 11:45 PM

Oh have I been there!!! Very well and descriptively written... And welcome to passions

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

DeathTrippy
Junior Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 45
WY USA

2 posted 2000-07-16 11:50 PM

Well formed. Painful silence describes me perfectly.

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 2000-07-20 10:28 AM

Meara...how the heck did I miss this? I'm so glad I decided to go back a few days!! This is exceptional. Let's see more from you. Hardrock

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-07-20 10:33 AM

~Oh WoW!!! I agree,...where had this one gone? Precisely written. Mmm,...Super work. Be well M. *Peace.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-07-20 11:00 AM

Yes Meara, same here. Very well written message. I feel it.
Catalinamoon

"Keep dreams alive, for if dreams die,
life is a broken winged bird
that cannot fly."

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Magebeast
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 60

6 posted 2000-07-20 12:42 PM

The feeling in this was tangible. Great words!

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

7 posted 2000-07-20 07:06 PM

It says so much in just a few words, I really enjoyed it

Welcome to passions by the way.
Yours truly
~Broken~

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