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Dark Poetry #2

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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-07-16 11:39 PM

    Human Born
       But,
    Demon sent
I'm here on earth to
       Vent
   On your time
      Spent
Because the meaning
        Of life
           Has Been
              Bent

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

1 posted 2000-07-17 12:49 PM

oh yes and twisted and crooked and all jumbled up. excellent excellent excellent!!! way to go brobean!! man i love reading your work!! good one!! love ya!!

sisbean

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-07-17 08:23 AM

Hi J, good to see you. I can relate here, love the short and powerful message.

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

3 posted 2000-07-17 12:10 PM

Excellent work as usual!!!
I love that "Human born but demon sent" and "the meaning of life has been bent" (was it ever straight?

)
What's all this stuff kynder's got with beans. Jaybean, brobean, sisbean. Two beans in a pod with Spitfire (firebean? surely not spitbean?)

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Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

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Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

4 posted 2000-07-17 08:27 PM

JJ...good stuff here. "Demon sent"...whoa, talk about bad parenting. Hardrock

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