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Teen Poetry #3
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Emmaline
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since 2000-08-20
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0 posted 2000-08-21 07:29 PM

Little, ugly weed
Pushing up through the pavement
Was it worth it all?
                            
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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-08-21 07:52 PM

This is a great haiku, it makes you think.  It's great
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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2 posted 2000-08-21 10:58 PM

wow i like this alot...it really makes you think...i mean if you say a weed is ugly then what do you think about everything else???i mean its a part of nature...some bugs are ugly so what do we think of them???should we say is it worth it???

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~
Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-08-22 11:07 AM

very interesting.  I like it though.  Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"
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