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Teen Poetry #3
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EroseGrover
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 44
SD,CA 92126
0 posted 2000-08-30 02:37 PM

HATE is such a strong word
you can dispise,Loathe even
discord a person.

I dislike with a passion
is another way of saying
HATE just a nicer way

So if you can say dispise,
Loathe, and discord Why
would you pick a word Like HATE

HATE is a strong enough word
to tear down the strongest person
that takes no crap from anyone.

So try to Rfrain from saying HATE
you may be tearing someone down
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TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
1 posted 2000-08-30 02:55 PM

Great poem keep up th awsome work!
  Lauren
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