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Moonlights Swoon (Haiku) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Moonlights Swoon Moonlight rays reflect On lazy mirrored lagoon And croaking frogs swoon Dark Angel [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ *Swooning* here over the sheer beauty of this lovely Haiku. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
DA~ Lovely  What a swoony moony haiku loved it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Marge and Tracie, thanks so much for your wonderful replies glad you liked |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey hon, you're getting pretty good at these things...  K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark angel, Rebeep, rebeep, swoon. Very nice. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ribbit, ribbit...a beautiful haiku, Dark Angel! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
The swooning frogs sing of how magical words kiss make them feel princely Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is cool!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Very good! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey SB,Thank ya very much! Seymour...ReBeep back at ya! Thank you for cute reply Elizabeth...ribbit ribbit...Thank you glad you liked.Jamie, such a beautiful reply Thank you my friend Justbleu, Thank you so much EagleOne, Thank you |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
D_Angel, A delightful Haiku! Well Done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I don't know how many book submissions you have but......God I Love This Poem.... ''what do you think????'' Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
They took my Ribbit!! LOLYour good at these DA!! Keep writin em' |
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