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Open Poetry #8
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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville
0 posted 2000-07-25 04:44 AM

the water
Cleanses another day
Beads travel down
Taking my worries away.
I could stand this
For more than I have time
Let the water bring memories
Of those eyes.
I wonder if she dreams
Under the water like I
Of green eyes set with affection
Though she may not know why.
Let the water dispel my fear
Of what foolishness may bring,
Time to start again
My heart beating.
© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-25 10:39 AM

there is always something so calming about rain...or flowing streams...this is a beautiful piece..i enjoyed it very much.
ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806
2 posted 2000-07-25 10:41 AM

nice read, Michael G ... i liked this piece ...
MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
3 posted 2000-07-25 10:45 AM

nice...very  nice
~~softly
Maureen
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