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Sit beside me...
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Sit beside me... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Sit beside me, burn inside me, I just need you near You’re so pretty, smart and witty and you have no fear Hide me... hide me! Hide me silence I am still afraid Have some pity, help me city, I must face my fate I am burning from desire, but this fire feels so cold Cupid’s arrow hit a sparrow missed the lonesome world Higher... higher! Take me higher, this is not enough I’ve been honored with great sorrow I’m alone in love Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Alone in love must be the loneliest place there is. Great expression, Master! Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yeah, what Denise said. Great work once again Master! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you both! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oooh,...I like this one. I like the little beat that it has,...but OUCH to the message it holds. Take care. *Peace. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very well written it flows so well  I enjoyed reading it alot, sad the message it holds  |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! |
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