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Open Poetry #8

Love's Kiss Senryu

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-06-23 06:09 PM

~LOVE'S KISS SENRYU~

Two lovers embrace
true love's passion in a kiss
a taste of heaven

*By Melissa Honeybee*

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2000-06-23 07:13 PM

Melissa you pen,
What my mind and heart just dream,
Perfect and succint.

awesome, you give me wings to fly

Olias

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 2000-06-23 07:47 PM

Your haikus and senryus are always so nice, Melissa!

Elizabeth

I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2000-06-23 11:46 PM

Love's Kiss That Went Wrong

A shy girl soon frowns~
Awards hard slaps on her man~
"Why, you really stink!"

HA!don't beat me for spoiling the tranquility of your kiss!LOL

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-06-23 11:51 PM

I doubt seriously if the tranquility will be broken. So much said in so few words. Liked it alot.

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