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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-06-23 06:11 PM



~HATRED'S LULLABY SENRYU~

Hatred is acid which
destroys the holding vessel,
this fool's lullaby

*By Melissa Honeybee*
© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
OLIAS
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1 posted 2000-06-23 06:55 PM

This is a venemous piece, a change from your soulmates warmth, but dark and light I love your work Melissa

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Denise
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2 posted 2000-06-23 09:05 PM

Wises words, Melissa. Great little poem!

Denise
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3 posted 2000-06-23 11:29 PM

love the metaphor of hatred as acid...very nicely put
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