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Late Night Arrival

symphony_of_thoughts
Member

since 2003-08-03

Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2003-08-31 05:49 PM

Dingey, orange light passes through this carraige
Passing like a wave through to the windshield
Guiding a path to each next turn back home
Street lights scattered upon this horizon

Distant lights juxtaposed in their concrete pool
One of several others I am
Trying to find my way home
This late night arrival beckons me

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

1 posted 2003-08-31 06:27 PM

oh yes conjures up those familiar feelings. imagery is very good.

hugs june x

gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

2 posted 2003-08-31 08:39 PM

This is a great description of a familiar scenario. Well done!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2003-09-01 12:03 PM

Good description of the solitariness of a late drive home. Joyce

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