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Gypsy Junior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 20VA Coast |
I'm sitting, listening quietly wondering if existence matters, in the eyes of strangers- whether the light creeps through or distills the vibrations bleeding into... one moment of perfection. Tiny stairsteps hide the shadowy stare of a thousand bullets piercing the tainted moon and I memorize the reflection, a glitter in the thickening wood. I hear a restless voice breezing the open skin of my neck, pushing me into the depth- Yet I stand. Patient. A tall particle of life, gently swaying in the stirring wind. Bent, weathered and changed- I breathe the existence within peacefully. To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Life from the tree's perspective. Very unique. Joyce |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Really loved this.. it could be read over and over again.. and receive new meaning and emotions from it. Definitely a keeper!! |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Very interesting work here, Gypsy. I like this. Pushes the envelope. \\ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Very profound. Makes you think. Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Interesting poem! Enjoyable to read. Betty Lou Hebert |
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