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Craw Member
since 2003-09-11
Posts 73Scotland |
Stone wings of land roll into a belly of sky beyond eyeshot. They are pinned by trees today, orange as old fire. The wind coils Lydia's hair, a little fleck of yellow paint just a smudge, a thumbnail such as you might spot in curling photographs, or faintly in a muddy mind's eye. It's tragic enough, nailing moments like butterflies. I sit on the hillside and furiously blacken pages, as if trees don't wither, hair won't fade, nothing ages. |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
wonderful....thanx |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Wouldn't that be wonderful Maggie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Craw~ If I haven't done so previously ... let me welcome you to PiP~ 'Stone wings of land roll into a belly of sky' Such an imagery-laden lead in ... that caught my eye~ I like the all of it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well done. If the wonderful moments could only last. Very thoughtful piece. Love, Joyce |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Beautifully woven piece that makes me feel it as I read it. That is a poem! Sparticus |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Craw: Great images in this poem and gives a glimpse of Scotland as well! Trillium Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Craw, I went to Ireland last summer and it is soooooooo magical, sweet friend, I love the Dingle Bay peninsula especially with all the ogham stones, yay, God Bless You, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craw, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't put my finger on it but I love this poem and can't say why |
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