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sevret sigh

Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2004-05-10 02:47 PM

Secret Sigh

gentle whisper of gentle heart
sweet voice of promise
friendship that shall endure.
forever fresh, spring breeze
baby bird song, sung along
wing of butterfly; steady, sure.

wild flowers in the meadow
swaying grasses waist tall
white clouded crystal sky.
love resting on bent arm
touching everywhere possible
parted lips with secret sigh.

~~~~~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-05-10 04:07 PM

Very very beautiful and quite romantic.
Love the waist high grasses.
Much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

2 posted 2004-05-10 08:20 PM

I really enjoyed this lovely poem. It has a nice romantic feel to it. Thank you for sharing!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2004-05-11 02:14 AM

this poem has such a happy, contented sound. Joyce

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

4 posted 2004-05-11 08:15 AM

Great word painting. Waist high grass, meadows, what a lovely idea. Love ya... Shawna

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

5 posted 2004-05-14 12:43 PM

Wow... beautifully said.

Deb

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