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Symphonic Season - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-10-25 08:03 AM

Gown of Autumn hues
trees sway in windy accord
Falls orchestration

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-10-25 11:28 AM

A lovely description. Joyce

Wikket
Member

since 2000-01-29

Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA

2 posted 2001-10-25 02:58 PM

Deep Ellie...yes, fall is here! You really have mastered these!!

Bravo!!!

~~Jamie

"...This is how you remind me of what I really am, this is how you remind me..." --Nickleback

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-10-25 10:41 PM

What perfect imagery!

This is beautiful, Ellie!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-10-26 06:29 PM

Lovely description of fall, ellie.

Betty Lou Hebert

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-10-27 01:56 PM

i like "Falls orchestration"

one can derive several readings from this line..cool...

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