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Autumn Morning Haiku trio

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-11-10 11:25 AM

crisp, the morning air
fallen leaves crunch underfoot
silver frost veneer

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autumn mornings hush
leafless trees stand in silience
breath hangs in the air

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gray, the clouds of morn
overcast, the burdened sky
autumn colors fade

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2001-11-10 12:42 PM

Dennis; Nice to get to say twice how heavenly these Autumn Haiku are! The King of Haiku reigns!! Sis

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2001-11-10 01:17 PM

Very beautifully done, Dennis!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-11-10 07:28 PM

You truly describe autumn ast its bes in your haikus. Joyce

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Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-11-10 10:42 PM

These are very good! Each one a small gem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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