Twelve Rosebuds Giggle Haiku

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Twelve Rosebuds Giggle Haiku

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-29 07:35 PM

Twelve Rosebuds Giggle
~*~
Twelve rosebuds giggle
like eager girls dressed in pink
long to show off blooms

BloomingRose

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

1 posted 2002-01-29 09:15 PM

BloomingRose,
What a delightful haiku, a breath of fresh air. Thanks for sharing.Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2002-01-30 09:21 AM

do rosebuds giggle?? I hope so..nice read

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2002-03-12 11:38 PM

You use imagery and metaphors perfectly with this delightful haiku!

I'm impressed with this write.

I love this, in fact, it's going into my library!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2002-03-13 05:53 AM

Dennis~ Thank you kind sir.

Pegasus~ Roses are so delightful! Perhaps the smile they cause is a reflection of what we see in them. Glad you enjoyed.

Melissa~ You are so kind. thank you so much.

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

5 posted 2002-03-13 06:10 AM

This is a perfect Haiku for Springs first waltz!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2002-03-13 12:45 PM

Just lovely! I can smell those roses from here.

Betty Lou Hebert

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