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leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2002-01-31 11:23 AM

insisting
resisting
my touch
my words
breaking
taking
my heart
my head
wanting
needing
you
you

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2002-01-31 12:02 PM

I like the style you chose..nicely done. welcome to the Pub.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

2 posted 2002-01-31 03:41 PM

mm...sweet intensity..excellent!!

kudos

Sol

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-01-31 04:02 PM

this is a sweet verse. Welcome. Joyce

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2002-01-31 05:29 PM

Welcome...and I do like the romantic simplicity of this poem! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2002-02-01 04:34 PM

A lot said, with very few words. Good job!

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