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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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An even line, beneath the rim. Fortitude of self within. A fine line's gold, beneath the edge-- just enough to make lips dread. A fan of fingers behind glass-- leaves of tea portend the past-- patterns lie in future's spread. Saturn sighs in voice of dead. Just enough to make me weep. I search of you--within tea leaf. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW... Regards O Serene one, Sudhir |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Ooh delightful and sad...  Touches me though, I like it! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely writing. I use tea bags. I'm frightened of what I might see. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
serenity: I enjoyed your poem. My grandmother used to read tea leaves and it was uncanny how many times things she said she saw, came to pass. Betty Lou Hebert |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all very kindly--I realize I'm not here much--but I am determined to start to get to know poets from other the less traveled forums as well...it's been to my dismay to discover that I have neglected so many talented poets--Thank you...I will be back to read after "rush hour" is over. (supper, dishes, blah blah blah)  |
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laryalee2 Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 96British Columbia, Canada |
Wow from me, too! This is delicately woven with a mystical sense -- holds a bit of a shiver! Lary |
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