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A Stranger...Now

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-07-23 12:47 PM

Last night I saw... you in a new shade
Though I didn't know... whether I liked... you anymore.
The world... the color you painted
Crash on mine...
Then I realized...
That we are standing...
In the opposite end...
Of spectrum.

I... I used to think...
That you're wise.
I... I used to like...
Your words.

Now... now your true color shown,
What should I do?
Now... now you've become...
A stranger... that I don't know.

A stranger... that I don't know.

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

1 posted 2002-07-23 02:49 PM

I really liked this particular piece, especially becasue I can't relate so much to it. I wasn't to sure about the .....in between some words at first but then as I read it, it sounded great. Great write, hope to hear more from you soon.

~*Riley*~

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2002-07-23 03:30 PM

hey Riley, so you are new to the Forum? Welcome! Glad you like my poem.

See you around soon

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2002-07-23 04:46 PM

Eliza: Good poem about your feelings towards a person who has changed. This happens a lot in life I think. I guess we need to treasure the moment, as change seems to be inevitable.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2002-07-23 09:15 PM

Very well expressed Eliza. I liked the hesitation marks. Joyce

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