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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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-Emotions- a innocent exchange of niceties has left me so perplexed every waking moment is filled with thoughts of him and i reflect so filled with worry of how this came to be i don't know how such feelings consumed me how did he get under my skin at exactly what point did i breath him in? it seems my rational thoughts have no place here emotions running from love, care, to utter fear maybe i should just leave these thoughts of him behind in hopes to end this torement in my own mind is it possible-could this be he has given to me the sweetest gift to ever be? This was a poem that was co-wrote by a friend online...a very good friend. He continues to contribute to my life, my being, my spirit, my existence. How lucky I am to be in the mix of such great people. -Holly |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a wonderful poem.  There are some great questions for insight on a person in there. Excelent work."Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
"at exactly what point did i breath him in?" I love this line,good poem holly. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Thank you so much! I have always viewed my own work as "too emotional", so it's nice to hear others don't think so. Have you ever felt like you took a breath and completely inhaled someone? That's it in a nutshell. Thank you again, -Holly |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
yep...I just did..... very beautiful work Holly. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Chris, Thank you very much for taking a breath and inhaling. hehe -Holly |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
I will definitely have to agree.....that "breathing him in" line was totally awesome!! Nice work....and I know exactly what you mean!!!!! Christina =^..^= |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Holly, your work is indeed not "too emotional". . . in fact, it's quite good. . . Very insightful. . . taking a breath of someone. . . it can be wonderful. . . especially if you don't exhale. . . Thanks for this breath of you Holly. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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