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~ Love Locked in Time ~
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~ Love Locked in Time ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Love Locked in Time ~~~ I'm feeling strange very weak ... floating in time no itch ... no twitch ... lost memories climb ~ Eternity slips to tireless eyes while dreams of past moments that awake my surprise ~ All sense like a dream all fragrance from mind your touch I remember your love locked in time ~ In blackness a bloom of realities' fright I'm lost in my doom ... in my death ... blackest night ~~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is beautiful Rex Allen, love this serious side of you---can relate to this mood well---but a word of unsolicited advice? Don't dwell there too long, luvie, 'tis like quicksand...and the darn stuff sticks...(serenity heads for the showers...) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I liked the title of this poem. Good expression of a love that haunts the mind after the source of that love has gone. ~~nice writing~~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
serenity ... thankyou ... I fine ... I write simply from memory and revising old dusty works that simply need a new spark in their fire ... no shortage of dust bunnies here ... My first wife was a poet and our relationship bombed with nuclear waste in the form of my first scribbles ... over 20 years ago  Danny ... thankyou ...glad you enjoyed ... posting it now was better than writing it then |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rex~ I love all aspects of you but I do enjoy this side of you immensely. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou Tracie |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love your serious stuff as much as your funny stuff! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I have to agree with Denise on this one! I love it! But all of your work just touches me! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Denise ... WhtDove You're both a treasure |
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