| Open Poetry #7 |
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My Lost love..(repost) |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
I've finally lost her, there's no tomorrow for us, there's only darkness now. I will forever miss you, I haven't said good-bye nor shall I. I will hold the bitterness within like always. I was never able to say I love you because you've changed. Good-bye...my love... (a repost from Dark Passions) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This poem just seems to bring out the emotions you think have been put away. The verse that I found most captivating is .. I was never able to say I love you because you have changed .. Thanks for the great reading CocoBaci |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem.I like it very much. ![]() |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This poem speaks to me as if I know you, you know me, I guess for now your still a mystery... I know what you felt when writing this...great poem! ![]() |
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