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rene
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since 2000-04-24
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0 posted 2000-05-20 07:32 PM

into the perimiter,
swallows flew
                         the marshes concealed by whispering reeds

they were thrown
leaping like children
                         lost in thoughts of far away lands
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brian madden
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ireland
1 posted 2000-05-20 07:37 PM

I hope there is a triolgy. beautiful and haunting image.
rene
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2 posted 2000-05-20 08:52 PM

its more than a trilogy, part one is somewhere back there
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