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mitymopr Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 14 |
I sit here alone with only a beer knowing she is out there hopefully near A tear drops my eye this blows being lonely oh god if only someone would stop by my heart cries out "why does it hurt?" I'm stronger than this so here I sit alone, still until we meet under god's will |
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Crystal Lynn Junior Member
since 2000-05-21
Posts 18Miami, FL. USA |
great poem  i look forward to reading others take care....crystal |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Beer makes it worse yet I know I still use it to ease my pain. Great poem Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this..it has a nice flow...I feel like a beer now. James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beer! Wonderful sedative. If only it'd never wear off, huh? Nice, keep at it. j. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh what saddness and loneliness I felt when reading this  Hope your days are brighter soon Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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