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Open Poetry #7
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svtcobra
Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 14
Syracuse,NY USA
0 posted 2000-05-24 02:10 AM

Life is good
I have true friendS
abundance of material things
All anyone could want

Except you

a good job
A big house
A fast car
Everything


Except you


How can it be
The attraction is there
Words have been said
All is on order


Except you

Will I wait
Will I move on
Can I take this
You could be the one

It's all up to you
© Copyright 2000 David J. Gassen - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2000-05-24 07:16 AM

Welcome to Passions Svtcobra - I enjoyed this poem of yours and your first one - just one question for you  - does he/she know they are the one?  I hope you find what you are looking for - keep smiling  

Roniece
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