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INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2000-04-17 08:34 AM

Maxinkuckee mist
rises from rippled surface
merging lake and sky

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-04-17 01:28 PM

This is lovely, INclan...your words allow one to visualize, so easily, the scene. Very serene.

~ Claire

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-04-17 02:36 PM

...count syllables, syllables, syllables...I'm learning, INclan!

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 2000-04-17 09:37 PM

Thank you, Meadowmuse, you are most kind.

Thank you, Sunshine. It is not hard with practice.

INclan

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-04-17 11:29 PM

INclan~
Lovely ....
do you live there?
I have friends who will be in Culver
for the Scow Nationals.

Maxinkuckee Yacht Club is the host of the
NCSSA C Scow National Championship Regatta - June 15-18, 2000.

Enjoyed muchly.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Tenderheart
Junior Member

since 2000-03-20

Posts 17

5 posted 2000-04-18 12:41 PM

INclan Looks like you've done it again. Read it, visualized it, saw it!
You are one with the words. Thanks!

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

6 posted 2000-04-18 12:59 PM

Haiku is something of a mystery to me....But have mastered the art.

Jeffrey

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

7 posted 2000-04-18 01:54 AM

Nicely done

Rex}>{{{{o>

Joannak
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since 2000-03-11

Posts 121
Indiana, USA

8 posted 2000-04-18 07:22 AM

INclan, I can see the mist rising from the lake now. You describe vividly what I see each morning on my drive to work. Such a lovely piece.

Joanna

What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

9 posted 2000-04-18 02:52 PM

These things are hard to figure for me. I'll take a look later.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2000-04-20 02:35 AM

lovely piece of haiku

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