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Rain Haiku |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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As rain to my brow consider the flower now cooled brow, flowers bloom Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The rain does serve a purpose, even though it does sometimes ruin our plans, like today for instance! This is very pretty, Sunshine! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Like this, I do ....  "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you denise - sorry to "rain" on your day...LOL and Pepper - pleases me, it does, when you like... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a lovely, creative haiku! It flows well, especially the first two lines that rhyme. Take care, Melissa Honeybee  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Like a little bee Melissa floats in to see the newest Haiku! Thank you! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wow,i really enjoyed this  BTW,i think you are improving tremendously ") |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kaile, are you becoming one of my favorite readers...? Thank you SO much for the lovely compliment... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kaile, are you becoming one of my favorite readers...? Thank you SO much for the lovely compliment... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
ahhh how sweet Sunshine! Thanks so much for writing that for me. Well your haiku really is excellent! And the one that you wrote for me is perfect too! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little Ms Sunshine~ You 'shine' indeed in this one ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melissa, you are more than welcome... Marge, now you're sounding like my Mom! LOL! Glad you are enjoying... |
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