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A Mess |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Tightly tie and bundle untidy loose ends precariously dangling Dangerously Close To F A L L I N G Apart Scattered debris gathering dust metallic rusting oh where is an oil can when you need one? (c) 2000 CM Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Indeed! Where is that darned oil can...it always seems to be missing! Great poem, Corinne! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
be sure the oil is environmentally friendly before you squirt it  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Where indeed? Interesting poem, Corinne. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
LOL - this is my attempt at metaphorically capturing the essence of needing to be rescued. Thanks, Denise, Rex and Martie. |
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