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Open Poetry #10

A Silent Road

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-10-17 02:49 PM

A silent road lay before me
like an ocean all alone
Silence conquers my dark feelings
that have surfaced since I was born
The road calls me to my future
one that I wish I saw
Beckons me to start my journey
traveling into your arms.

A silent road lay before me
like my heart is an open song
Where stars confront their desolation
in the act of dying out
To take a step in one direction
takes me to where you are from
The silence of the open heart ache
cannot contort me to my fall.

A silent road lay before me
the journey starts when you're alone
Like stars colliding for inaction
our hearts beat as though they are one
A silent moment in my memory
as I see your tears begin to fall
Capture them with my souls presence
as the road ends at your door.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

1 posted 2000-10-17 03:38 PM

You have such flare to your words. You write with such emotion, and have a wonderful way of conveying your message without fancy words. A great write as always.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2000-10-17 10:24 PM

BTT.......went by to quick for everyone to see this wonderful piece.

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

3 posted 2000-10-17 10:34 PM

Good work, Michael. I liked this, especially the ending.

Elizabeth

Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near...
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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-10-17 10:41 PM

this is very beautiful, sometimes we make hard decisions not knowing what road to go down, but here I can see it's quite evident to where she should turn in order to reclaim the right road.

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