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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

0 posted 2000-10-18 03:54 PM

day morsels ...

for the remainder of this day
thoughts of you with me stay
of youth, life, reality
brimming heart's vitality
when to see your lifting face
spirits soar up to the place
where you and i become as one
when love's remainder equals none

after night's sparkling song
the day to you, i belong
if once more i see love's bloom
hearts to race upon their plume
we'll dine the feast of love again
savoring morsels 'til the end
of love's final favorite course
our day's together be the source

M.A. Miller
10.11.00

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-18 04:38 PM

MA Miller~ Wow.....so pretty.......

-SEA

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2000-10-18 05:29 PM

loved it M.A. nicely written..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Elizabeth Cor
Senior Member

since 2000-10-13

Posts 879
Over the river and through the woods

3 posted 2000-10-18 05:42 PM

This is like Act 2 of Marge's Barely Dawn. Morning arousal, nightly stimulation, "love's final favorite course"...
and both so genuinely delicate. Of course if I've over-interpreted this in a sensual light, blame the poem I just finished!

Loved this line: where you and I become as one/when love's remainder equals none. Thank you, MA

~ Beth

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-10-18 06:32 PM

Very beautifully rendered...it is so nice to have you back writing again.

Trew
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada

5 posted 2000-10-18 08:08 PM

Very nice, indeed!
May you never famine, after the feast.
Great poem!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2000-10-18 08:27 PM

MA--Very lovely reflection!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-10-18 11:47 PM

MAMiller~
A delightful treat.
Eliciting *sighs* of enjoyment.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

8 posted 2000-10-19 01:38 AM

Mark...what a sweet read...it just blows right over the skin and nibbles at the mind

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

9 posted 2000-10-19 10:00 AM

thanks to all above for taking the time to read ... it was a pleasure to write

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