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Elusive Reality |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Elusive Reality and it strikes her again directly in her core, and pragmatically, she recognizes the veracity of the day so the desires of the eve before remain as elusive as a butterfly or a dust mote in the light of the sun’s stream through the morning the truth weighs heavy on her mind, the flicker of hope, elusive, fluttering there within her heart, it’s struggle to live to see another night after what will occur this day as reality, so easily pinning her down instead of her grasping the dream heavy, heavy this sensation of the lost this elusive reality Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ Wow.......this is amazing......really liked it.  -SEA |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
....good one!..as long as we have just a flicker of hope, we have hope! Loved that line, flicker of hope. Marcy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sunshine-- title grabbed my attention from the start. and the poem itself is beautiful and amazing. as long as we have just a little bit of hope...anything is possible. enjoyed this read greatly. take care. amy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine..... Reality always comes along and shakes one out of their dreams.......but still there is a 'flicker of hope'.......dream on.........  Follow your dream! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, Marcy, Amy, Sunny1, some days there's more hope than others...but the dreams will never die...there will always be the 'flicker'... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
As they say...sometimes "Reality Sucks"...but if you believe in your dreams then reality can become that of what you dream of so often. May not happen overnight but it can happen. After all, wasn't it a dream one time for some little boy to fly or another to walk on the moon? Wonderful write my friend. Hold on to whatever your dream my be. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Karilea! I related closely to these words ... hang on to those dreams! Thanks for this lovely and thought-provoking read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, loud applause and lots of noise Love this rhyme It's about time We flew, We the few With our dreams Forget the schemes Hold the hope As tight as a rope That holds the heart And the soul not apart Karilea it's true That if not for you Marsha's dream could die When your work makes me fly Karilea, this is amazing. (And I know my rhyme isn't that good but, I just had to leave you a little something) Oh and I love it. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, thank you. When I go to sleep, I look forward to what I might see, and I do thank each and every day for what it brings... Kit, thanks for validating that others out there can relate...that means much... Marsha, your poem is wonderful, and adds yet another dimension for us that would travel to the stars...thank you so very much...{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, wow excellent poem, "instead of her grasping the dream heavy, heavy this sensation of the lost this elusive reality" "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
These days. . . I find that I have plenty of reality. . . couldn't I just not have any for one day? Wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Written straight from my heart, Karilea, the flicker of hope, the reality that tries so hard to take away the dreams. Perfect, beautiful, and so very true. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Where hope has flickered a candle once burned brightly - The trick is finding the match to light it once again ... Hope flickers in the eternal internal light ! Beautiful write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, the truest form of flattery..picking out specific lines...thank you... Sven, the answer is: not getting out of bed...LOL...[sorry!] Cat, all of my stuff is, [un]fortunately, straight from the real me... Marge, where's that bonfire when I need it? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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