Open Poetry #10 |
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Listening to our own song |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages ![]() |
Listening to our own song Listening to the rain, that sing his own song, Listening to the heartbeat, that sing his own song, Listening to the love, that sing our own song, Listening to the passions, that sing our own song, Listening to the breathe, that sing our own song, Listening to the silence, that sing his own song, Charisma |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How beautiful a tribute to a loved one. Catalinamoon |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful, passionate verse for someone dear to your heart Charisma ... you've captured such deep emotions within these lines. Lovely in sentiment and presentation! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Seems romance is the notion of the night here at Passions. This is lovely and very well presented. Enjoyed it so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Charisma, what a beautiful moment you've captured with your poetry. Cherish these days always. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such a beautiful piece...the love you feel was so tenderly penned here..and your graphics were beautiful! |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this is so tender.......so beautiful...... ![]() |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, Your love shown so clear and deep in this beautiful poem. Your heart is blessed with wondrous deeds. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I can honestly say that I don't know that I have ever heard a more beautiful song of love than this one. Absolutely beautiful. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
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