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Two Hearts - One Sigh
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Two Hearts - One Sigh |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Two Hearts - One Sigh ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ When a sigh of desire whispers your name in the night an exhaled essence of love drifts softly through time wending it's way to you traveling the path across the stairway of the night picking up stardust to sprinkle upon your fairy tale dreams a special moment is born in your heart when it comes to rest on the satin pillow where you cradle your head and whispers 'I love you' ~*~ then barely above a whisper you breathe it back from whence it came and it tiptoes through the path of familiar stars strung across the twinkle of endless night falling quietly into another's heart and whispers 'me too' ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
wow, thats all i'll say. ron |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh yes, me too.......this is so lovely Marge.  Thank you so much for your help! I made it work. Hugs sweet one. -SEA |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Yelp, margie, your smokin!! WoW! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
LOVE THIS ONE  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- my friend...you really got me with this one...wow...got me all choked up here. i just got here, and this is my first read of the night...i'm so glad i found it. this speaks volumes to my heart. beautiful. love you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...me too. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge once again you've weaved something so tender and inspirational for all to see...love your heart dear friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*SIGH* This is such a *wonderful* and *romantic* poem. I truly loved it, great work. Charisma |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh wow Marge, oh wow. Whewwwww, I'm just speechless here my dear friend. Hugs, Juls |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just beautiful, I can hear the sigh.. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is so beautiful, breathtakingly beautiful. Oh I love this, it's perfect. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Breathtaking indeed Marge...loved it.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A whisper of love A sigh so deep A moment from above A memory to keep Time opened in chance Worlds seen in light Love captured in dance As two are one tonight |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooo lovely, Marge! Denise |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ The ending was, as usual, the best part. Loved it! Deb |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How many Marges does it take to make me speechless.... just one... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Marge, try me on for sighs!!  |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ooh Marge....this is soooo beautiful...very romantic words here, wonderful work as always. *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Marge this is truely lovely. Love it, Rich |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ron~ Thanks. SEA~ I love me too's. Marcy~ Just my heart talking. CocoBaci~ Thank you, lady. Vicky~ I would know without asking that you'd like it. Paula~ *Smiling* Tracie~ Thanks, my friend. Charisma~ So glad you liked it. Juliet~ Glad to catch you speechless. CatalinaMoon~ Thanks for listening. Marsha~ I enjoy sharing with you. Victoria~ Sighs of ecstasy are breathtaking, indeed. MarkB~ You sigh all over my heart. Denise~ Thanks, my friend. Karilea~ I'm glad to give you each one. Balladeer~ I've been trying ! Krista~ Thanks for letting me know. Spiked~ Glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Marge, So very beautiful and soft. And you have captured the softness of this poem. Bill |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ Thank you for the sweet comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Wonderful piece my friend. I think 'me too' are the greatest words one can hear. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ This is beautiful. You always do have a way of taking my breath away, dear friend! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
I agree with Tracie! Really nice one Marge! "Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Thank you ... glad to know we agree ! TerryW~ Thanks, my friend. Hey ! It's GREAT to see your breathless self ! You're gone too long ! Toddles~ So glad you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Beautiful Marge-When i sigh My love knows and feels my love for Him.*sighs* -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Oh my dear you always have love floating around in such delightful ways, wonderful reading. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ *Sighs* are soft flutters of the heart. Thank you for your sweet reply. Cerenity~ Thank ya', love. I try ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, No words only sighs. Keth Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Glad to hear the *sighs*. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
dazzled by the stars strung across the sky, hanging by a thread, Marge this is a magical poem, totally awed at the essence it bestows. |
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