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Four Seasons Of Love |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Four Seasons Of Love I love you in the winters icy cold As snow drifts softly from on high Smiling, my hand you tenderly hold Warming my spirit, you're the sun in my sky * * * I love you in the fresh new spring As daffodils nod their golden heads Oh my! You smile, my heart goes zing We play at love among the flower beds * * * I love you in the summers hot sun As children race along the beach Laughing we share our love, our fun A haven for lovers we will soon reach * * * I love you in the autumns smoky mist As the trees turn their different hue Your touch, your loving special kiss What else is there, except this I love you Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...and I love this poem! Lovely, Marsha!  Denise |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
What else could there be to beat such love. This is a lovely poem Marsha. Thanks Jon [This message has been edited by jonmcm (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ (Mushy) This is so lovely.... my favorite: "I love you in the autumns smoky mist As the trees turn their different hue Your touch, your loving special kiss What else is there, except this I love you" fantastic! -SEA |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
..good writing and enjoyed Marcy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Denise, thank you, truly I thank you  Jon, Mmmm, oh yes, I'm very lucky, and I know just how rare this is. Thank you, I'm glad that this little poem gave you a smile.  SEA, Oh love thank you, actually that's my favourite verse too. Take care Mushy, whoops I meant Marsha Marcy, very like my sister love, now you are sure you're not. It would be just like her to haunt me. Besides it would explain whom the grass was, and how they knew all about the poem! Oh my poor ears, I shall be doing pennance for ever. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love your poetry every season of the year. Fall is here, so keep them coming Liz |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful portrayal of timeless love throughout the seasons Marsha. Beautifully written, with a lovely flow ... much enjoyed this delicate rendering! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Marsha ~~~ Your lovely poems bring joy to my heart all year round!!  Follow your dream! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Elizabeth, you are very kind to me, and I really don't deserve that you should be. I just enjoy writing it, and being amonst all my favourite family members is a blessing in itself. Kit, you are always so sweet to me, and I thank you, because although I know I don't deserve such friends, you all are anyway. Take care, and Kit, if you ever need an ear give me a yell. With all the sisters I have a few more would be welcome. Besides have you met my sisters! All as loud as me, and I'm the quiet one. (Actually we all say that, good honest family tradition, blame the others!) Take care Kit Hi lil sis, you are an angel, a real poppet. Take care love, Oh and I've asked Francessca to give me the lowdown on what you can expect, over the next few months. Thought it might help) Take care love, I'll speak to you as soon as I get some voice back Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well, I would definitely say that you have got the whole year covered quite well and quite warmly at that. Excellent write my president. Loved it. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my dear kind friend, I thank you, warmly? Mmmmm well you know how I like heat! It's living in a cold, damp, flooded place you know, I begin to yearn for some warmth. Glad you like this one. Now would that be a dignified enough response from your president, I know, well ish! Take care President Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Liked the content, the ideas and the Love...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Very nicely done, a poem to reread each season of love. *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, I glad you like this, it must be my season of love. Take care  Wynter, thank you for reading and I'm glad you like it. By the way welcome to Passions you'll like it here. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ this is so pretty, I just wanted to bring it back up and read it again. -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, well love you know me and pretty, actually I like this one, and you know me and my own scribbles. Thank you love I appreciate it, you know I do. Takecare Mushy I was thinking you know I've got so many names, it's like a role call just to call me! I'll give you the list and you are at liberty to choose your favourite. The first four are my real names and then the nicknames start okay here we go Marsha Beverley Melody Grace Bubbles Mushy Marshmellow Bebee Em Messy Marsha Bev and by no means least the one that my sisters call me Choas And please don't choose Beverley I really hate it. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Em, er Messy Marsha, You kept this poem beautifully neat and is well written also. i like the sentiment expressed. be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
kethry, thank you, glad you like this one. You know what sisters are like, it was my habbit of leaving stuff everywhere that led to that particular nickname. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SouthernStar Junior Member
since 2000-10-30
Posts 23Georgia |
Ah, love, sweet love. It seems you have found a true one and for that I am happy for you. Lovely poem. Tessa |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ you will always be Mushy to me for your sweet soft fluffy heart and your beautiful words that come from it........... -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tessa, I have, and I am very happy. Thank you I do appreciate the time you have taken to reply, I truly do. SEA, so be it, Mushy! Soft hearted, well bless you love, just don't be too nice to those porters, they don't deserve it! Oh and they are still arguing over what to call themselves. David said they did think of OSCAR, which stands for, Our SEA is Creative and Always Responds. But I think they've decided to hold one of their rowdy meetings tonight to definitely decide. I promise that they won't come up with anything really vulgar. Now how am I ever to keep order now they know my nickname I don't know! (I'll have to beat them all regularly) Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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