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Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

0 posted 2000-10-28 11:37 PM

Beneath a waning moon,
A tangle of limbs,
Lost in the throes of passion
Roll and tumble,
In jigsaw form,
Beads of pearly lust,
Stippled across heated flesh.
Insatiable lips seeking the quenching they desire,
Feverishly searching for an oasis
Among barren rolling dunes of pleasures,
Windswept,
Reshaping in a moment,
Then forever lost.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-10-29 10:24 PM

OOOOHHHHHHH MY...this is HOT HOT HOT...great write here...have you tried adult?

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-29 10:27 PM

Now I haven't, don't even know where it is.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2000-10-29 10:31 PM

Those nights that you always remember, I know them well. This is hot, and so true of that feeling.
In reply to your reply..

Yes, its current, I can't seem to conquer it right now..
Sandra

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-10-29 10:32 PM

Oh my Ron, well now....Whewwwwwwwwww I have to agree with Paula. This is HOT!!!....Wow......Ummm I really liked it by the way...lol.
Juls

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

5 posted 2000-10-29 10:38 PM

You naughty poet, you! lol

Much love all,
Krissie

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

6 posted 2000-10-29 10:42 PM

~Oh my Yes!! You need to visit Adult...I think open is getting hot!!~

~Cherie~

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

7 posted 2000-10-29 10:44 PM

Hot and Cold all in the same weave....the
moment that burns leaves you cold and alone
when it's gone....Excellent Writing Ron~

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

8 posted 2000-10-29 11:34 PM

Ron, where were you this past Friday night? I think I might've "bumped" into you!

Great write, words so true.

Take me as I am or watch me as I go

Rainydays
Member

since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

9 posted 2000-10-30 11:43 AM

"Beads of pearly lust,
Stippled across heated flesh."

Ron, you have chosen your words with skill and care in this piece. Are you a painter?

I enjoyed reading this provocative, perceptive poem.

Rainydays

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

10 posted 2000-10-30 11:58 AM

thank you rainydays. i actually am a painter.
I guess the stipple effect(Seurat)gave me away.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2000-10-30 06:50 PM

and you have a great stroke of the pen, as well.....

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

12 posted 2000-10-30 07:14 PM

Very good. Enjoyed the read.

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