| Open Poetry #10 |
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Arguments with a muse |
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Eilidh Junior Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 30 |
The sun went down ages ago Why am I still up, I really must know? NO TIME TO NOTE THE H'RS FLOWN BY GET THIS DOWN OR YOU WILL CRY. This is the end, I must give up I need sleep, or coffee in my cup. COFFEE IT IS, YOU REALLY MUST STAY 5 MORE PAGES, THEN I'LL GO AWAY. 5 more pages is more then gone Still you continue to whisper so long. JUST A BIT MORE I PROMISE TO BOOM I'LL HAVE A HOLIDAY WHEN DEADLINES DO LOOM. I'm a slave to the pen from dust 'til dawn I should have been born in vampiric form. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
this is an interesting inter-dialog ... logical, but entertaining ... nice |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh my...I think our muses must be related...why else would I be sitting here at this time of night LOL |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eilidh, boy can I relate to this. Great poem be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Eilidh Junior Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 30 |
Thanks all. The muse likes late hours for all of us it seems ![]() "There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Muses sometimes hide when the rush of the 'day job' consumes... what more perfect time than night then lol? Good write. K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
you know this is how most of us are when our muse is playing...they never play during the day only at night...well mine does ![]() Great poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes, late hours, early hours, peeking into dreams and hot-water showers... they take over, don't they! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
she's been pestering me too. nice write. |
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Eilidh Junior Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 30 |
Muses pester all of us. And like I said take a holiday when you really need them (IE deadlines looming) Thanks all. So happy you could relate to this. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Cute!!!! Send her my way will you?? Enjoyable read!!! Take Care, Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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