Open Poetry #10 |
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Today's the day |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Today's the day, you're going home Flying across the ocean It sounded almost long enough To have you here four weeks with us Now you're gone; I'm feeling blue Tears sliding down; missing you I wish you didn't have to go I hope somehow at last you know Wherever you go; you take me too Because my heart belongs to you Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This flows so beautifully Peppermint! Such a sadness when we have to say goodbye, lovely expression in this piece! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I feel the sadness of a long distance romance.miles between.miles apart. a bridge we build to connect the heart. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
always so happy on the arrival day..and so sad on the departing..i have been through this myself..nicely written Peppermint.. ![]() ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thanks Kit; yes it's sad to say goodbye, so I just chose to say... until later ![]() Yep, Ron....building the bridge and it's getting stronger every day...it's going to have to be strong to walk across the water ![]() ![]() Thank you Victoria!! Yes, and how time flies!!! < !signature--> Peppermint Life is a Wheel [This message has been edited by peppermint35 (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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