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Floating Flowers (afternoon delight) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Slowly, slowly... fingernails, solace of a touch-- close your eyes release surprise of power in seductive flux. Golden hairs upon the thigh a squint of eyes of hunger's tide, wash away footprint of pain, Insanity becoming sane... and all be damned-- awake--I shower you I ride the raging tower.. whimper, beg, and moan-- devoured, a quiver, shivers, floating flowers-- I puddle into you... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ Girl........ you are on fire here LOVE IT!  -SEA |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Serenity I think my computer just melt beautiful poem sigh hot and tender... "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful! Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
SEA---thank you much, you sort of got the ball rolling today...(so to speak) LOL &hugs brian...glad it was good for you too! *wink* Elizabeth, I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and for your gracious reply! thank you much, good people!!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
*gulp* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Golden hairs upon the thigh a squint of eyes of hunger's tide, wash away footprint of pain, Insanity becoming sane... and all be damned-- awake--I shower you I ride the raging tower.. whimper, beg, and moan-- devoured, a quiver, shivers, floating flowers-- I puddle into you... ================ YOU PUDDLED???????? OH BABY!!!!! me thinks me will pay money to see that  mmm mmm mmm SO---fess up..ya been in my raspberry tea... I told ya that stuff is POTENT LOL oh man do i love this poem and this line........ >"Insanity becoming sane"< EXACTLY what I been trying to say LOL what a WAY COOL line that is... poetic envy on that one me sweet ... *sigh* ....I know ... its hell being a moth.. and then its NOT LOL YOU KNOW *blowing kisses to the south* rest up baby....you've had a big day LOL me |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Seren this is very erotic. Should i throw in the towel? Might need it Rich |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
mmmmmmmmmmmmm you know that I like this one serenity. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Chris, um, thanks, I think. That was a pretty noncomittal gulp!!! Rich? again, whatever it takes! Sven, said like a man who knows. and m'twin, ppssst....I say we put Raspberry Tea in the water supplies...EVERYWHERE!!!! Thanks guys had much fun with this one!!! |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
serenity ... a seductive flower it is ... nice work |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Floating flowers on the puddle that is you...very erotic girl... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~S,...'I puddle into you...',...*sigh*. Gawd gurl,...you do amaze me. Glad to have caught this one. Always am. You know,...you outta get all your works into a book for me to carry around wherever I go....I'd like that. Take care of yourself. *Peace you. |
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