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Rose Colored Glasses |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
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When the night wears rose colored glasses as you walk in the moonlight with him the wind whispers sweet molasses skinny dipping in a midnight swim When he warms you within his arms and the ocean pounds against the shore in sync with rose colored promises is it really the moonlight you adore? He disappears with the light of dawn and your heart aches to the core was it the moonlight he too was drawn or maybe he was just keeping score Moonlight and rose colored glasses long stem roses and sweet molasses A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
~ooooooh just love it Victoria ~ roses and molasses.....ahhhhh, beautiful. Bonnie |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
So nice of you to peek in again today..ha.. you certainly do look rosy ha...  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 I'm thinking that the long stems are on the way? After making sweet molasses in the ocean... It's a sure sign that the rose colored glasses, due to a sudden fog, most definitely came off. Loved it. Bob <>< |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Simply beautiful, Victoria!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
 ..haa ..I cant wait till they get here Mr.Bob haa..you are too funny Peppermint...Thank you so much..watch out for those rose colored glasses  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ I just love this ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Don't laugh now, but I actually have a pair of rose colored glasses, they make the world look prettier.. that has to be a good thing, right? Love your poems, as always. Sandra |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Well written as I can almost smell the salt water splashing on my feet. Rich |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Marge..thank you so much kind lady.. Sandra..i bet you look cute with them on ha.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
WHOOPS..how did you sneak in there spiked ha..i love the smell of the ocean..thank you so much for reading.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I wear them most all the time- keeps my faith up ~G~ - well done V ~S~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes I know you do Bill..youre always in a good mood..no matter what..thanks for peeking in.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this i likes the imagery yuh |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A bittersweet weave Victoria but your way with the words made it a delight to read~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you walt and butterflies_dont cry nice to hear from you both.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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