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Fruit of temptation.....a poem by the new guy!
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Fruit of temptation.....a poem by the new guy! |
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Poetboy96 Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 12 |
"The fruit of Temptation" Looking from a distance, hesitant to act upon, an instant reaction. You know you should, but you do not know, how this story unfolds. You seek wisdom and answers, from the magic man. No telling says the crystalball. So the fruit of temptation, blows in the breeze. It's within your grasp, will you have a taste? You give in, there was no choice. I always knew temptation would win, as you take a bite. One leads to two, then to three. What an incredible fruit, you have picked from the tree. -John W. Hedglin- www.johnspoetry.com I'm new to this place and what a place it is. I am glad to have been given a link to it. |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Hi John, A nice opener for a first post. I agree temptation is quite a powerful agent. Had a look at your website too, and notice your a Black Sabbath fan: a man of taste  Cheers Jon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome to Passions..im sure you will love it..looking forward to reading more of your poems.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
John, I like this one . . . a poem with a lesson in it. Very well done and a nice entrance into our little circle of friends. Welcome to Passions!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome to passions! A lovely message you've penned here! Corinne |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy it here! This poem is really good, it's a great entrance piece "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HI John and add my welcome to the list its so nice to have you here... you've made a poetic first impression with this poem... very cool writing.. I gave your page a peek and will go back as time allows... thank you for the kind reply to my work. i look forward to more of yours take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Poetboy! Great poem! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Hi New Guy, I'm the new girl! (smiling) Brace yourself, I think you're going to like it here! These folks are so nice and the poetry sharing is remarkable. I enjoyed your poem ~ thanks! Rainydays |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PB96, welcome,welcome to Passions. This is a grand entrace, and we will all delight as you find more of yourself through your work to share with us... it will become a most delightful experience... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetBoy~ Welcome to the family of Passions. Nice entrance you've made. You will find some of the nicest people on the Internet and the most remarkable talent too ! You're gonna like it here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Now that you've put your foot in the door...Welcome...enjoy the ride Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
I'm glad I gave you the link here....and i'm glad you got such a good response! Very good poem. love, leslie |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'You give in, there was no choice. I always knew temptation would win, as you take a bite. One leads to two, then to three. What an incredible fruit, you have picked from the tree.' Fantastic lines here! Welcome to Passions! I'm sure you will enjoy your stay here, as everyone is absolutely great!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
poetboy, welcome to passions. I hope you enjoy your stay. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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