Lover's Bliss (part 3 of 3 )

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Open Poetry #10

Lover's Bliss (part 3 of 3 )

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

0 posted 2000-09-27 12:32 PM

Your hands caress my body
Making me your own
I feel your heart beating faster
As we reach levels yet unknown

Our bodies move in unison
Our hearts begin to beat as one
As a new day begins to dawn
With the rising of the sun

I feel you tense beneath me
And see the pleasure in your eyes
Then you pull me closer
As moans turn to whispered sighs

Now we lie close together
Sharing kiss after tender kiss
And I whisper to you softly
Let's start each day like this

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

1 posted 2000-09-27 12:36 PM

ahhh! Well worth waiting up for! Of course, now I CAN'T sleep!!! Do this again!

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2000-09-27 01:17 AM

Jeff,
you ended this one with a POW! great job friend. excellent!
take care,
amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-09-27 03:17 AM

Bright the day, sleepy one. Even more bright after reading this.
If you are not sleepy you should be this wonderful poem stirred me to my depths. I hope you weren't up all night writing it. Worth the wait. Stunning.
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Snowdwen
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

4 posted 2000-09-27 04:17 AM

Wow is all I can say.. really really great work.
Michell

"You live you learn and life moves on"

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2000-09-27 04:41 AM

How about starting each day with a poem like this
Very beautiful
Liz

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2000-09-29 10:27 PM

to quote you...EXACTLY

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2000-09-29 11:01 PM

Jeffrey,

Wonderful writing here my friend.

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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