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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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In one spin Of eternity’s wheel In a desert Mixed with sand Are the countless bodies Of the revolution I am thirsty I could will the sea Of endless parchment To turn to paper I could fill my chance With encouragement My markings will be Swept away With the next gust Of wind My thirst will be Insignificant With the next Painful blink of your eye I’d like to be your tears If just to roll down your face To escape my surroundings To find a new body Through your pores I have Found the way Did you ever wonder why You were God’s creation Because He loves you Just a reminder Sandy haired blue eyed girl You’ll never die Marry me Don't turn away [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ ***SIGH*** ROMANTIC........Loved this one!  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ This is GORGEOUS ! 'I am thirsty I could will the sea Of endless parchment To turn to paper I could fill my chance With encouragement' You've just got to be proud of this one. WOW ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Walt- WOW!!! this is amazing...absolutely beautiful. i never know what i'm going to get when i open one of your posts, but one thing is certain...i will ALWAYS enjoy reading what i find. awesome write, my poetic friend. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sea smiles smiles smiles marge yuh im dubbly proud now vicky thank you for makin me happy happy that you liked it yuh |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
this is a *pretty* one. what heart. ---------- I am thirsty I could will the sea Of endless parchment To turn to paper I could fill my chance With encouragement ------------- great lines.... wow. those are the kind of words that make you say,"why didn't i think of sayin it like that?" beautiful! Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I’d like to be your tears If just to roll down your face To escape my surroundings To find a new body Through your pores I have Found the way Oh Walty, Damn this is beautiful, I enjoyed it from beginning to end, so romantic Excellent my friend! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey Walty... this just rocks... it has style, and such care in the words. Wunneful... K The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanky severn gal now read all the rest of my poems i ever written yuh hehe thanky darky big smiles and thanky ethan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Is there another one coming to answer the question....tremendous metaphors in this one Walt I enjoyed it from beginning to end... there's some beautiful and original work here as there always is in your poems...but I have to say they are a pleasure to read.... ethome |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ethome your replies are always so thoutful yuh thanks |
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