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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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meteoric fall stagnant seeming sky lights building pressure inside waiting for the day when all shall open wide and I will then make the one big fall and go out in brilliant and take it all Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunshine, A luminary explosion...love the way you closed the piece. Robert Joseph |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is superb, not one wasted letter and so wonderful. Simply beautiful, utterly brilliant. I love this, I really do. Take care Majestic Mushy M  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
smash and grab smash and grab is what i say yuh ! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Take it all!! Falling here my friend. . .  --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
RJ, had I more time to learn graphics there was a glorious picture that would have made it even better. Thank you for your kind comment... Marsha, waste not, want not... WOW...nope, wrong message, read again... Sven...nope, wrong message, read again... thanks, everyone! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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