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Eternal Light |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Eternal Light I stand outside The slight breeze Carrying a chill And I realize that you are gone Memories wash over me Touching my heart That cries at my loss Of such a tender soul The times we laughed The times we cried The times we just were As I watch the sunset I suddenly understand That you aren’t gone Like the sun, you will be back Surrounding me in love And your eternal light Your hand holding mine From beyond where my Searching eyes can see. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The times we just were =========== As I watch the sunset I suddenly understand That you aren’t gone Like the sun, you will be back Surrounding me in love And your eternal light Your hand holding mine From beyond where my Searching eyes can see. ================ yes...exactly ... and our hearts heal in that light and these realizations ... this is perfect and pure RP ..and touches me deep take care sweet poet jm |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Janet - Thank you for taking time to stop in. I'm glad you liked it. The ones we love never actually leave. They are always with us.. in our hearts and memories and that keeps them very much alive. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
RP-- beautiful and very touching! also very honest look at the fact that those we love live on through our memories. this touched deep within me. thank you for sharing this! simply beautiful. take care. ~amy~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Amy - Thank you for stopping in. I'm glad my poem touched you deeply  . |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very touching..........a wonderful read as always..... Jenn E |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jenn - Thank you for your nice words I'm happy you liked it. |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Nice allegory going on here. It's unfortunate the sun will eventually blow up. Good thing it ain't gonna happen anytime soon, eh? *Grin* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Masked - I thank you with a chuckle..lol. You get the most original reply award!  I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping in. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Another very good'n, my friend...yup, yup! jwesley |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
jwesley - Well thank you  hehe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely write Rosepetals! very deep and spiritual overtones mingled with those wonderful reflections from the heart..... take care.....ethome..... |
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