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Open Poetry #10

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2000-11-13 05:45 PM

History of the Universe

Big star exploded
now light and motion in space
creates everything

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2000-11-13 06:49 PM

Is there anything missing?

Just fooling around. my first haiku.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-11-13 07:53 PM

Nothing missing! Very good Haiku!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-11-14 06:56 PM

I like it too. . . well done. . .

Makes me wonder why I spent so much time in History class!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2000-11-14 07:03 PM

PM~ nothing forgotten, nothing left out......like this

-SEA

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2000-11-23 03:54 AM

another unusual senryu penned from your hand..i like your unique perspective when it comes to writing senryu

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-18 08:23 PM

sweet!

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