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shadows of time |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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a faded picture a battered frame yet the image remains unmarred a distant heart a broken dream a shattered soul within a fragile love a dim reflection grayed by the shadows of time a faded picture yet the memory shines clear forever dwelling within my soul -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! That would be quite a conquest for me, to have a clearer memory than a faded picture beheld. Of course, an awful lot of my memories are very long ago, now. ;o} Entertaining thought, though. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vicky~ I know just what you mean......I loved this one!! Pulls at my heart.  -SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
vlraynes, Likewise I know the feeling too well. Cheers. "a distant heart a broken dream a shattered soul within" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Brought tears to my eyes........sensed a quiet honesty in this that just shines. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A faded picture can sure open memories door, I know..you expressed it so well. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Vicky* This is beautiful...I can see those memories dancing...excellent work~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...i have lots of 'faded' pictures...and the memories they hold, can not be marred by their battered pic frames.. ....this is a really nice one tricks..hitting home for me..bringing back so many memories while i read.. hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ 'a faded picture a battered frame yet the image remains unmarred' Oh, so true, my friend. And I'm getting the jump on congratulating you for your NEXT post will be your 1000th one. Way to go ... you're a class act ! Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
a faded picture yet the memory shines clear forever dwelling within my soul ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ great lines....love the whole poem, and you captured it very well. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
VAS- happy to entertain you. glad you enjoyed. SEA- so happy to hear that this one touched your heart. so glad you like it.  Daniel- and 'cheers' back to you, my friend. thanks so much for the kind words. dreamkeeper- wow...thank you so much. your kind words really mean alot. glad this touched you. Martie- i always appreciate hearing from you. your talent amazes me, and your encouraging words mean alot to me. thanks so much...really happy you enjoyed this one. Holly- and some wonderful memories they are. thanks so much, my friend. really glad you like dg- i thought you might enjoy this one. really glad it hits home for you...and i'm not surprised that it does... and i must say that many of the nicest memories include you, my friend. love and hugs to you Marge- thanks so much for the 'congratulations'! you always know how to make me smile. glad you enjoyed this one. you're pretty darn classy yourself!! love and hugs back at ya... Charisma- thanks for the kind words... really glad you enjoyed. hugs to all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Faded photographs still hold the same memories. Wonderful poem. Deb |
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