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Haiku (In response to Ethan's challange)
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Haiku (In response to Ethan's challange) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Butterfly Intricate patterns Of softest lace intertwined On delicate wings * * * Deer Eloquent beauty Such graceful and quick movements Frolicking through fields * * * Eagle Soaring in the clouds Spirit of beauty and grace Wings outstretched * * * Angels Heaven’s own beauty Soft wings outstretched with such love Watching over us ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
I like the way you wrote your Haiku's. It's pretty interesting when you link them all together.  "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful pictures painted here....I loved all the nature themes and the angels too. Well done! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank both of you for your nice comments I'm glad you liked it. I had fun writing them. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
I do not know what Ethan's challenge was, but I believe that you have met the challenge. These were simply beautiful. Garfield |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RP~ these are beautiful. I really like the haikus, I don't have the patience or skill for them, so I admire those who can and do. -SEA |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ggrn - Aww..thank you for the compliment.. I'm glad you liked them And if you go to the Poetry Challange forum then you can see the challange SEA - I also love haiku. In forth grade I wrote my first poem..and it was a haiku. The teacher put my poem in this frame thing for the whole class to see..lol.. I've been hopelessly hooked ever since. I only wish I would have kept it.. ~sighs~ Thanks for stopping in ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
oh, i love the serene-ness these haikus paint! i do so love the butterfly and the deer one. both of those are awesome! thanks SO much for responding! Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Ethan - I'm glad you liked them Thank you for the challange! As I've said over and over I LOVEEE haiku  It was fun.. I might even .. wait.. I will prolly answer your challange again ~chuckles~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow.....you really shined on these....I would say that you met the challenge well. Great Haikus girl. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
These little haikus are wonderful to read...well done most enjoyableTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Haiku perfection... these a great...so serene and gentle Im partial to butterflies and angels ... so ya know which ones i love great replies to the challenge take care jm |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - Thank you Haikus are my nitch Tracie - I'm glad you enjoyed them  Thanks for stopping in.JM - I don't know about perfection..lol.. but thank you for the compliment I personally like the 2 of them as well the best. Thanks again ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 Awesome haikus, and you know that I love butterflies and angels  Melissa~ |
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